Thursday, 8 January 2009

Poem

heya
I am going to start a poem that i wrote and your going to finish it by commenting.Oh and hannah did you see shelly? Lets get started

Lollie pops taste so sweet ,
i like to have them as a treat,
Yellow,blue, pink and red,
some are even as big as my head,
Lollie pops are hard to chew,
thats why you should only have a few,
comment and finish it an stick to the subject please!! The subject is a bit obvious LOLLIE POPS

2 comments:

Livz X @ CT said...

y did u do a peom

Hollie S 6 @ CT said...

wow mebby.

ur watching me type this lol. i'll help with the poem.

lollie pops sometimes are covered in hair,
thats why im usually scared.